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Give me constructive feedback on these builds! (please)

Give me constructive feedback on these builds! (please)

Epicjalolx

Epicjalolx

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Epicjalolx
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Give me constructive feedback on these builds Please
Build:
https://imgur.com/a/UUdBhRY
Sadly some of the builds got griefed when I didn't have the core protect plugin so rip builds :(
And do you think I can get into a build team?
 
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So... I would probably not be able to do better myself because those builds are already really really good and impressive, but since you asked for constructive feedback I'll try to point out what are the things that could make your builds even better

For your giant build, I would say you could are more details on and between the pillars. As it is big, we need more details or else it looks a little bit empty. I don't know exactly what is this build for, but you could also add a little more relief and volume on the ground. We can't really see with those screenshots but it seems kinda flat. Plus you could try adding more details like paths, and make a more "logical" terraforming by making the differents blocks percentage differents on certains parts of the map. Sorry I don't know how to properly explain that.

For your tiny builds, firt of all they are really cute. In my opinion you should try doing less diagonal builds. I'm not telling to do straight lines, but mix the two. Like, instead of doing 1 bloc, 1 bloc, you could do, idk, 3/4 block ? I think having that much 1 block diagonals kinda break the homogeneity of your build. Doing that could also alllow you to put more details without the build being overloaded.

Sorry if I'm not very clear. Again, english is not my first language and I'm kinda struggling to explain myself in particular contexts.
 
Noctah said:
So... I would probably not be able to do better myself because those builds are already really really good and impressive, but since you asked for constructive feedback I'll try to point out what are the things that could make your builds even better

For your giant build, I would say you could are more details on and between the pillars. As it is big, we need more details or else it looks a little bit empty. I don't know exactly what is this build for, but you could also add a little more relief and volume on the ground. We can't really see with those screenshots but it seems kinda flat. Plus you could try adding more details like paths, and make a more "logical" terraforming by making the differents blocks percentage differents on certains parts of the map. Sorry I don't know how to properly explain that.

For your tiny builds, firt of all they are really cute. In my opinion you should try doing less diagonal builds. I'm not telling to do straight lines, but mix the two. Like, instead of doing 1 bloc, 1 bloc, you could do, idk, 3/4 block ? I think having that much 1 block diagonals kinda break the homogeneity of your build. Doing that could also alllow you to put more details without the build being overloaded.

Sorry if I'm not very clear. Again, english is not my first language and I'm kinda struggling to explain myself in particular contexts.
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wow thats a BIG response here :O good job on writing this! :D
 
Noctah said:
So... I would probably not be able to do better myself because those builds are already really really good and impressive, but since you asked for constructive feedback I'll try to point out what are the things that could make your builds even better

For your giant build, I would say you could are more details on and between the pillars. As it is big, we need more details or else it looks a little bit empty. I don't know exactly what is this build for, but you could also add a little more relief and volume on the ground. We can't really see with those screenshots but it seems kinda flat. Plus you could try adding more details like paths, and make a more "logical" terraforming by making the differents blocks percentage differents on certains parts of the map. Sorry I don't know how to properly explain that.

For your tiny builds, firt of all they are really cute. In my opinion you should try doing less diagonal builds. I'm not telling to do straight lines, but mix the two. Like, instead of doing 1 bloc, 1 bloc, you could do, idk, 3/4 block ? I think having that much 1 block diagonals kinda break the homogeneity of your build. Doing that could also alllow you to put more details without the build being overloaded.

Sorry if I'm not very clear. Again, english is not my first language and I'm kinda struggling to explain myself in particular contexts.
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The ”giant build” was not done when I took the screen shot, afterwards I did put some more detail between the pillars. For the landscape I tried making it flat because it was the arena where you would fight a giant slim hints on why it was so big.

That was actually my first diagonal build and I see where you coming at with but I thought it was really good and done, so I didn’t want to change instead I made another build with 2 block diagonals and it also really looked good so thanks for the feedback! In the whole city (it’s gone now cause of some griefer) the’re only 7 diagonal builds out of about 45.
 
Epicjalolx said:
Give me constructive feedback on these builds Please
Build:
https://imgur.com/a/UUdBhRY
Sadly some of the builds got griefed when I didn't have the core protect plugin so rip builds :(
And do you think I can get into a build team?
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embox the builder here

your windmills are legit from a tutorial

your homes are overdetailed, overdetail = bad

the first pic is kinda dope ngl
 
embox said:
embox the builder here

your windmills are legit from a tutorial

your homes are overdetailed, overdetail = bad

the first pic is kinda dope ngl
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A: I did not build those windmills B: I don’t see how it’s over detailed but I’ll see if I can improve that from other people’s perspective thanks for the feedback!
 
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