Wanna get some opinions for my staff application!

[Dipslox]

Who finna tell him if u share ur application u get install denied......

actually lmao

Good luck! There are a few grammar mistakes, but good luck!

wait where lol i don't wanna read through again

 

[justapistachio]

good luck! This might get locked but idk ?‍

Who finna tell him if u share ur application u get install denied......

uhm no, that isn't true I believe, they'll take some time to at least consider it before accepting/denying it. Also it's instant not install...

 

[Tryharding]

cool you showed ur own staff app publicly while they are mostly private. Good job for being big boi!

 

[Dipslox]

good luck! This might get locked but idk ?‍

uhm no, that isn't true I believe, they'll take some time to at least consider it before accepting/denying it. Also it's instant not install...

no dumbass they install the deny smh my head

 

[csyre]

I know a lot of members on the server and I feel like that builds a relationship because they would know I am not the moderator that has no personality they will know that I am the same as them and not more powerful than them.

grammar is kind of off. won't go into detail as I'm not going to write your application for you. also this doesn't really fit in the skills section

he last thing I can contribute to the community is my time and effort in helping everyone out and putting in a lot of time into the server and as a staff member.

this isn't a skill

Another way I can help the community is by being active in the community by talking to players in chat, moderate the server, and just overall make the community a better place for the players

this isn't a skill. you need a lot more detail and lot more skills.

I have been staff on two different servers one being a YouTuber's server as an administrator. The server was called MoltresPvP and the YouTuber that owns the server is MarkeyBuilder as an administrator, I worked a lot with the higher up staff members mostly the developer, and running the server with them, which I think shows my maturity and my experience as a staff member. The server very popular have 100+ players on at peek times of the day, I was a part of that server for 2 years but sadly the server ended up shutting down due to the owners lack of funds and we tried to do anything in our power to start back up the server, but the owner didn't want it to happen.

you need to proofread. a lot. i get that some aren't very good at english / reading / writing depending on certain factors, but this seems really unprofessional grammar-wise.

The other server I was staff on this Minehut server called AzureStudios. I was a moderator on Azure and I have a lot of experience/knowledge with catching hacking, knowing what hacks look like, being able to detect ghost clients (Clients that are hard to detect by anti-cheats), and most importantly working with a staff team and not doing things on my own, but doing things as a team. I worked with the Azure staff team for a year but then I resigned for personal issues.

not to be rude but I don't think minehut is very qualifying- plus you need more detail. how many players etc

I believe that I would be a good fit for staff because I have experience as a staff member on Minecraft servers, I enjoy being a staff member because of the team aspect and just making the server a better place for all the players. I don't want to be a staff member because I want power I want to be a staff member because I truly enjoy being able to have a personal relationship with other staff members and just being able to make someone's day by cleaning up the server and making everyone have a better experience.

again, you should proofread and triple-check your grammar.
this is kind of nice, but not really why you would be a good fit. the only thing relating in any way to being a good fit is having staff experience, but listing minehut is kind of a -1 for me lol. most of this section is more of 'i like being friends ' than anything else

overall, you need to check your grammar. it really makes you seem like you don't care. you're also not very active on the forums. you have some posts but not a lot. would work on being active in the community, since you mention that a lot. your entire skills section would be better in 'good fit' as they aren't skills at all. you need more detail pretty much everywhere. personally, i wouldn't accept your application.

this isn't meant to sound rude at all btw lol

tiny edit: getting critique is a good thing, yeah, but NOT FOR THIS. ` it only helps *YOU*. it will not make you any better of a staff member and it won't save you in the interview. you need to be more independent with this. this application is meant to be written by YOU to show your skills- if everyone on the forums helps you, the application isn't yours and doesn't accurately show you.

 

[Listere]

I would put the effort into finding those accounts instead of saying you can find them. They are less likely to reject someone who tries their best instead of doing the bare minimum.

 

[Listere]

Here is my staff application tell me what you think! Yes I know this is not how you submit your staff application but, I would like some of the community's advice and constructive criticism.



_______________________________________________________________________________________


Minecraft Username:
Slushs

Age:
16

Timezone:
EST

Where do you live?
United States

Discord Username:
Duhgy#5956

How long have you been playing on InvadedLands?
I have been playing on InvadedLands for about 2 to 3 years now, but I have been on 2 different accounts I do not recall the name of the other account but if its mandatory I can get that information to you.

Have you ever been punished on InvadedLands?
Yes and No, to elaborate more on that I have been falsely banned on the server before.

Do you have a functioning microphone?
Yes

Are you able to record videos of hackers at reasonable frame-rates and quality?
Yes

What skills do you feel you have that will help the community?
The skills I can confidently contribute to the network is that I am a very positive person and I can often radiate that positivity to others, I know a lot of members on the server and I feel like that builds a relationship because they would know I am not the moderator that has no personality they will know that I am the same as them and not more powerful than them. Another way I can help the community is by being active in the community by talking to players in chat, moderate the server, and just overall make the community a better place for the players. The last thing I can contribute to the community is my time and effort in helping everyone out and putting in a lot of time into the server and as a staff member.

What past moderating experiences do you have?
I have been staff on two different servers one being a YouTuber's server as an administrator. The server was called MoltresPvP and the YouTuber that owns the server is MarkeyBuilder as an administrator, I worked a lot with the higher up staff members mostly the developer, and running the server with them, which I think shows my maturity and my experience as a staff member. The server very popular have 100+ players on at peek times of the day, I was a part of that server for 2 years but sadly the server ended up shutting down due to the owners lack of funds and we tried to do anything in our power to start back up the server, but the owner didn't want it to happen.

The other server I was staff on this Minehut server called AzureStudios. I was a moderator on Azure and I have a lot of experience/knowledge with catching hacking, knowing what hacks look like, being able to detect ghost clients (Clients that are hard to detect by anti-cheats), and most importantly working with a staff team and not doing things on my own, but doing things as a team. I worked with the Azure staff team for a year but then I resigned for personal issues.

Do you know any of our current staff members?
No

What languages can you speak fluently?
English

Why would you be a good fit for staff?
I believe that I would be a good fit for staff because I have experience as a staff member on Minecraft servers, I enjoy being a staff member because of the team aspect and just making the server a better place for all the players. I don't want to be a staff member because I want power I want to be a staff member because I truly enjoy being able to have a personal relationship with other staff members and just being able to make someone's day by cleaning up the server and making everyone have a better experience.

Any other information:
I am doing online schooling which means I will be able to contribute more time to the server.

I hope I get accepted and if I get denied, I will try to keep improving myself should I wish to make another staff application.

Lol don't say no to "Have you ever been punished". False or not, you have been punished. Keep it clear and concise.

 

[csyre]

Lol don't say no to "Have you ever been punished". False or not, you have been punished. Keep it clear and concise.

i didn't bother reading that bit at first, but yeah, i agree. they should've elaborated it better.

"I have been banned by the AC on Invaded, however it was false and I was unbanned after appealing." we don't even know if they got unbanned by appeal, could've bought an unban (doesn't count as false) or some other situation. needs more detail

 

[Listere]

grammar is kind of off. won't go into detail as I'm not going to write your application for you. also this doesn't really fit in the skills section



this isn't a skill



this isn't a skill. you need a lot more detail and lot more skills.



you need to proofread. a lot. i get that some aren't very good at english / reading / writing depending on certain factors, but this seems really unprofessional grammar-wise.



not to be rude but I don't think minehut is very qualifying- plus you need more detail. how many players etc



again, you should proofread and triple-check your grammar.
this is kind of nice, but not really why you would be a good fit. the only thing relating in any way to being a good fit is having staff experience, but listing minehut is kind of a -1 for me lol. most of this section is more of 'i like being friends ' than anything else

overall, you need to check your grammar. it really makes you seem like you don't care. you're also not very active on the forums. you have some posts but not a lot. would work on being active in the community, since you mention that a lot. your entire skills section would be better in 'good fit' as they aren't skills at all. you need more detail pretty much everywhere. personally, i wouldn't accept your application.

this isn't meant to sound rude at all btw lol

tiny edit: getting critique is a good thing, yeah, but NOT FOR THIS. ` it only helps *YOU*. it will not make you any better of a staff member and it won't save you in the interview. you need to be more independent with this. this application is meant to be written by YOU to show your skills- if everyone on the forums helps you, the application isn't yours and doesn't accurately show you.

fax ^

 

[ignJosh]

You should work on adding a lot more detail in the sections about your skills and why you would be a good fit for staff.

Make sure to add any proof you have of being the ranks you said you were, it makes it easier for the staff when they handle the application so they do not have to ask and wait for a reply.

All in all, good app, good luck!

 

[ApexWasabi]

I'm going to refrain from directly commenting on an application, but here are some guiding question.
Sorry if I sound harsh, but here's some questions I have to the application.

"I have been banned by the AC on Invaded, however it was false and I was unbanned after appealing." we don't even know if they got unbanned by appeal, could've bought an unban (doesn't count as false) or some other situation. needs more detail

If the appeal was accepted, then it counts as false and staff can tell the difference between purchased unbans and appeal unban. I don't think further details are necessary for this section.

I will be able to contribute more time to the server.

How will this benefit staffing?

The skills I can confidently contribute to the network is that I am a very positive person and I can often radiate that

Good skill, but to what extent does positivity and radiating it help staffing?

most importantly working with a staff team and not doing things on my own, but doing things as a team.

How does this benefit?

Elaboration on certain statement and connection to how it'll benefit you on InvadedLands staffing will help.

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[HipShoBob]

good luck! This might get locked but idk ?‍

uhm no, that isn't true I believe, they'll take some time to at least consider it before accepting/denying it. Also it's instant not install...

nope it’s true happened to me

 

[Jeelox]

How did you do?

 

[Doodles4]

+1 may need a tiny bit more explaining on your staff experience
wait I’m late
how’d you do?

 

[Yochran]

Here is my staff application tell me what you think! Yes I know this is not how you submit your staff application but, I would like some of the community's advice and constructive criticism.



_______________________________________________________________________________________


Minecraft Username:
Slushs

Age:
16

Timezone:
EST

Where do you live?
United States

Discord Username:
Duhgy#5956

How long have you been playing on InvadedLands?
I have been playing on InvadedLands for about 2 to 3 years now, but I have been on 2 different accounts I do not recall the name of the other account but if its mandatory I can get that information to you.

Have you ever been punished on InvadedLands?
Yes and No, to elaborate more on that I have been falsely banned on the server before.

Do you have a functioning microphone?
Yes

Are you able to record videos of hackers at reasonable frame-rates and quality?
Yes

What skills do you feel you have that will help the community?
The skills I can confidently contribute to the network is that I am a very positive person and I can often radiate that positivity to others, I know a lot of members on the server and I feel like that builds a relationship because they would know I am not the moderator that has no personality they will know that I am the same as them and not more powerful than them. Another way I can help the community is by being active in the community by talking to players in chat, moderate the server, and just overall make the community a better place for the players. The last thing I can contribute to the community is my time and effort in helping everyone out and putting in a lot of time into the server and as a staff member.

What past moderating experiences do you have?
I have been staff on two different servers one being a YouTuber's server as an administrator. The server was called MoltresPvP and the YouTuber that owns the server is MarkeyBuilder as an administrator, I worked a lot with the higher up staff members mostly the developer, and running the server with them, which I think shows my maturity and my experience as a staff member. The server very popular have 100+ players on at peek times of the day, I was a part of that server for 2 years but sadly the server ended up shutting down due to the owners lack of funds and we tried to do anything in our power to start back up the server, but the owner didn't want it to happen.

The other server I was staff on this Minehut server called AzureStudios. I was a moderator on Azure and I have a lot of experience/knowledge with catching hacking, knowing what hacks look like, being able to detect ghost clients (Clients that are hard to detect by anti-cheats), and most importantly working with a staff team and not doing things on my own, but doing things as a team. I worked with the Azure staff team for a year but then I resigned for personal issues.

Do you know any of our current staff members?
No

What languages can you speak fluently?
English

Why would you be a good fit for staff?
I believe that I would be a good fit for staff because I have experience as a staff member on Minecraft servers, I enjoy being a staff member because of the team aspect and just making the server a better place for all the players. I don't want to be a staff member because I want power I want to be a staff member because I truly enjoy being able to have a personal relationship with other staff members and just being able to make someone's day by cleaning up the server and making everyone have a better experience.

Any other information:
I am doing online schooling which means I will be able to contribute more time to the server.

I hope I get accepted and if I get denied, I will try to keep improving myself should I wish to make another staff application.

i really don't know whats good and whats not, i went way overboard and wrote mine in google docs, it ended up being 6 pages long





and then my friends said that im not supposed to write that much and im like huh

 

[jay.]

for anyone making claims about sharing applications resulting in an instant denial, that is wrong you're allowed to ask for opinions on your app. the reasons why staff applications are private is simply because not everyone wants their applications to be seen publically and most people don't want constructive criticism.

**it's only a denial if you ask a staff member specifically to review your app**

 

[Yochran]

for anyone making claims about sharing applications resulting in an instant denial, that is wrong you're allowed to ask for opinions on your app. the reasons why staff applications are private is simply because not everyone wants their applications to be seen publically and most people don't want constructive criticism.

**it's only a denial if you ask a staff member specifically to review your app**

factoid

 

[weewooisbad]

we play games alone to avoid the depression

 

[Voltage]

you need proof of ur staffing experience if u claim it got 100 players lol

 

[Aykade]

it's a good application, maybe a bit more detail would make it excellent. good luck!